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Innocence by ~RavenSetFree:iconRavenSetFree:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2009-2010 ~RavenSetFree
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I drew this at work last week, and finally got it scanned and colored! =)

Not much to say about this piece... I really like the way it turned out though.

Critique very much appreciated! <3

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~EverSake Jul 5, 2009, 8:21:00 AM
Looks so sweet! ^____^
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*luukie Jul 5, 2009, 3:31:38 PM
She's alive! :iconexcitedplz:

The facial proportions are pretty good-- the face could stand to be a little shorter, but I've seen women with chins that long so it's not too much of a problem.

I think the values could have been pushed a lot more-- right now it looks very flat and lifeless. The fading is very inconsistent, too, especially at the bottom, where the chest starts fading right below the collarbone, but the hair doesn't fade until well after that.

The feathers are very wiry-- it looks like half of it has been torn out and only a few strands remain. I would definitely recommend adding in color underneath it and shading, just as you would shade hair.

Sorry if I'm unusually blunt today, I've been tired and stressed lately. :<

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...as a result of alcoholism.
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~Hunt0h Jul 5, 2009, 6:00:50 PM
okay. I am not going to critique it. I am just going to say. WHY! can't i have those skills! :poke: are you real? how do you do it!?

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~3an Jul 6, 2009, 10:14:41 PM
it's... beautiful. Angelic

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Your soul has a single basic function—The act of valuing. Yes, or No, I wish or I do not wish. You can’t say yes without saying I. There’s no affirmation without the one who affirms. In this sense everything to which you grant your love is yours ~Ayn Rand
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~RavenSetFree Jul 7, 2009, 5:36:08 PM
Thanks. =)

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~RavenSetFree Jul 7, 2009, 5:36:57 PM
P.S. Did you notice the eyes? Haha, don't laugh at me. XD

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BEST PLACE TO GO WHEN YOU'RE BORED ---> [link]
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~3an Jul 7, 2009, 6:16:00 PM
lol, I DID notice the eyes and I thought it was awesome.

Hm. When I get a tatoo, I want you to design it.

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Your soul has a single basic function—The act of valuing. Yes, or No, I wish or I do not wish. You can’t say yes without saying I. There’s no affirmation without the one who affirms. In this sense everything to which you grant your love is yours ~Ayn Rand
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~RavenSetFree Jul 7, 2009, 6:31:14 PM
You're going to get a tatoo!? Well, if you MUST, then yeah I'm going to design it.

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BEST PLACE TO GO WHEN YOU'RE BORED ---> [link]
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~3an Jul 7, 2009, 6:34:42 PM
Of course I am! And thank you =)

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Your soul has a single basic function—The act of valuing. Yes, or No, I wish or I do not wish. You can’t say yes without saying I. There’s no affirmation without the one who affirms. In this sense everything to which you grant your love is yours ~Ayn Rand
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